'...And the moral of the story is, sometimes sacrifices have to be made, even if they are painful.'
What would people think of that for the last line of a story? I am not a fan and think it could be done better, but just don't know how exactly yet.
On that note, though I've just got back from the Dream Docks a couple days ago and that was certainly an interesting experience. It did take a load off my mind and now I can really focus on things here for the time being.
I'm planning on going back to school come September since it seems like the way schools work here work like schools across the pond so to speak, so starting days are different than in Japan. So until then, I figured I might as well write short stories or something to pass the time between work and the first day.
What would people think of that for the last line of a story? I am not a fan and think it could be done better, but just don't know how exactly yet.
On that note, though I've just got back from the Dream Docks a couple days ago and that was certainly an interesting experience. It did take a load off my mind and now I can really focus on things here for the time being.
I'm planning on going back to school come September since it seems like the way schools work here work like schools across the pond so to speak, so starting days are different than in Japan. So until then, I figured I might as well write short stories or something to pass the time between work and the first day.
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